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39. Out of Time

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There's a great weight on his shoulders, but he's glad for it. It reminds him that he's human, and, for a moment, that she is too. Their eyes meet for a final parting gift and then he is gone, leaving only the frantic, panicked pounding of her heart as a reminder of what once was.
I woke up late so I'm not going to have time to write you guys a short story, unfortunately, but here's some flash fiction I've been repressing.

Comments, questions, and critiques will always be welcomed.

This is number 39 in the 100 Themes Challenge.
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mjthinkpink's avatar
you should try writing songs, bro, because this sort of short, sweet stuff is gold.
i actually adore this C: